Comments for pith... http://pith.net/pith essence. core. substance. vigor. Thu, 28 Aug 2008 06:04:46 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 Comment on The Man Rock by Russell Edson by Scott Zieher http://pith.net/pith/writing/prose-poetry/the-man-rock-russell-edson#comment-11 Scott Zieher Wed, 12 Mar 2008 21:20:55 +0000 http://pith.net/pith/prose-poetry/the-man-rock-russell-edson#comment-11 You know, in New York City we have subway poems, shitty little snippets and stupid little smears from local children to established masters and this thing makes me feel like I'm sitting there now, but I'm wishing I was reading this poem and not little Jessica's dream of the Fragile Icicle Squid, lost in a mis-formed shrimp box. Or maybe I keep my library in shrimp boxes. I can't remember. I was a rock in a garden when I used the subway. I try not to anymore. You know, in New York City we have subway poems, shitty little snippets and stupid little smears from local children to established masters and this thing makes me feel like I’m sitting there now, but I’m wishing I was reading this poem and not little Jessica’s dream of the Fragile Icicle Squid, lost in a mis-formed shrimp box. Or maybe I keep my library in shrimp boxes. I can’t remember. I was a rock in a garden when I used the subway. I try not to anymore.

]]> Comment on The Library of Homunculus by Scott Zieher http://pith.net/pith/writing/original-poetry/library-of-homunculus#comment-9 Scott Zieher Fri, 15 Feb 2008 20:31:49 +0000 http://pith.net/pith/original-poetry/library-of-homunculus#comment-9 I'm reminded of an Ashbery poem of prospective titles. Every book on the shelf beginning "The" ??? Where is Zukofsky's early masterpiece "Poem Beginning The"? I’m reminded of an Ashbery poem of prospective titles.

Every book on the shelf beginning “The” ???

Where is Zukofsky’s early masterpiece “Poem Beginning The”?

]]> Comment on LOVE HITS LIKE THE POLIO OF BETTER DAYS by Jenny Benjamin-Smith http://pith.net/pith/writing/original-poetry/love-hits-like-the-polio-of-better-days#comment-5 Jenny Benjamin-Smith Sun, 27 Jan 2008 14:14:07 +0000 http://pith.net/pith/uncategorized/love-hits-like-the-polio-of-better-days#comment-5 Scott, Whew, I really like this! Great ending ... "All thanatopsy-turvy as lace..." Jenny Scott,
Whew, I really like this! Great ending … “All thanatopsy-turvy as lace…”

Jenny

]]> Comment on Cacophony in A Minor, Op. 4, No. 13 by Jenny Benjamin-Smith http://pith.net/pith/writing/original-poetry/cacophony-in-a-minor-op-4-no-13#comment-4 Jenny Benjamin-Smith Sun, 27 Jan 2008 14:10:09 +0000 http://pith.net/pith/uncategorized/cacophony-in-a-minor-op-4-no-13#comment-4 I'm not sure .. if I post a comment, will everyone see? I love this poem, again and again. Love, Me I’m not sure .. if I post a comment, will everyone see? I love this poem, again and again.

Love,
Me

]]> Comment on spam header assembly by scottz http://pith.net/pith/writing/original-poetry/spam-headers#comment-2 scottz Sat, 26 Jan 2008 18:45:20 +0000 http://pith.net/pith/original-poetry/spam-headers#comment-2 PENIS TOO SMALL? Try MINE! PENIS TOO SMALL? Try MINE!

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